Wow Detroit - what a powerful image you've created! Remember to use images that are "free to use" on your blog images - I know that you checked these for this item, of course!
Konichiwa Detroit, my name is Kobe from Waikowhai Primary School.
I really like your all about me presentation. I like how you put a picture of yourself on it and a picture of your favorite game, I like black ops to I’m wondering what your favorite gun to use is? I think you should check your writing again because there are a lot of errors. I would really appreciate if you would comment on my work. Here is the link to my blog http://wpskobep.blogspot.co.nz/ -Feel free to comment From Kobe Blog you later
Sup Detroit my name is Sione I go to Waikowhai primary school. I see that you like Black ops 3 and Xbox and stuff I do to. I also love your background I should've used that one instead. How did you get it??
Hi my name is Antonio from Waikowhai Primary School.
You're all about me looks really cool, and I like the pictures on your poster. I like how you said what you're good at and what you like doing. Also I like playing games as well and my favourite game is minecraft, what’s your favourite game? And I am year 5.
I would like if you could visit my blog, http://wpsantoniom.blogspot.co.nz/. From Antonio.
Hello Detroit My name is Ricky from Waikowhai Primary School. Your All about me has a lot of information about your favorite things to do like what video games you prefer and what console you favor. I also think your font for your heading was very effective because the outline made it stand out. Maybe next time you could make it in a google slide so there can be one subject about you per slide next time can you put more school subjects in it? I have made an all about me and posted it on my blog too.
Hello Detroit,My name is Steven from Waikowhai Primary school. I really liked your all about me post.I really liked how you explained what you liked to do.And i also like to play games to.I also like to play rugby too. What position do you play in Rugby? I think the colour was very effective to your background and your font suits the background to your all about me. Maybe you could use.It would be very cool if you could visit my blog at http://wpsstevenu.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi my name is Melinda and I am a student at Owairaka Primary in room 19.
I really like your All About me google drawings. I like how you put images and words so people can read it and understand what the pictures are like. I like the Batman and Superman image, have you seen the movie? Here is a link of the trailor of the Batman vs Superman movie- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IwfUnkBfdZ4 ( plus the video is a teaser trailor). Please visit my blog- http://odsmelindas.blogspot.co.nz/
Kia ora my name Is Antonio from Owairaka School. I like your ‘All About Me’ post. Do you play rugby? I like the All blacks and i support the All blacks. My favourite character is Goku in Dragon ball Z. Maybe you can use gifs of the All blacks and Rey Mysterio? If you don’t know about gifs just search up Rey Mysterio gifs and it would come up with moving pictures of him. It would be great if you want to come to my blog and comment. http://odsantoniot.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi my name is Sean from Wesley intermediate school and i just have some questions to ask you but if you don't want to answer the questions i ask you it's fine here's my first question what console are you on xbox1 ps4 xbox 360 or ps3 what realy intersted me into this blog is that the black ops 3 photo because i am really good at black ops 3 and i would just to see if you wanted to play with me From Sean.A
I really like the way you have set out your drawing with boxes for each image. It was awesome how you put the All Blacks in the drawing and it reminded me of my favourite All Black Richie McCaw. Detroit make sure you reread your comment and use capital letters for your name.
I really like. that you have put the All Blacks in your image and I think that you should use capital letters in your name. And I like to do boxing is your favourite. character in the All Blacks Richie McCaw. and I think you should use some describing words
Hi there, my name is Jackson and I am a student in Room 11 at South Hornby School. I really like the Call of Duty picture. It made me think of war games. Have you thought about good things because they are bad games. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is herehttp://middlesyndicatelearningcommunity.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi there, my name is Evan and I am a student in Room 9 at South Hornby School. I really like how you balanced your page . Your post made me think of when the All Blacks won the rugby world cup. Have you thought about fixing up your post just incase there are any mistakes. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://middlesyndicatelearningcommunity.blogspot.co.nz/
I like how you put the images in little boxes. The All Black reminded me of my favorite player Richie McCaw. Next time you should put a capital letter for your name. I like how you put the superman photo in, it reminded me of watching Superman vs Batman.
Hi there my name is Dylan I am in room 11 at south hornby school I really like how you said what you liked and not too much detail also Do you know that goku bo3 and call of duty are all rated pg 18?
Hi Detroit, I really like how you fitted all your awesome images in. I like the Batman versus Superman sign.You need to put a capital letter for you name.
I like the way you put your photos because they aren't blurry for me. I like the All blacks too. My favorite is Dan Carter .You could use capitals in your name.
Hi Detroit, I really like your images. It’s cool how you did all the images in just one square. Have you thought about putting capitals at the start of your name. It made me think of xbox games.
Kia ora Detroit i'm Henry from Wesley Intermediate School, I really liked how you used pictures to show what you like, and that you used some information to talk about yourself. I liked how you took a photo about yourself to show the readers what you look like. I think that you should write more information about yourself and to work on your punctuation and you full stops. What's your favorite game to play and who's your favorite rugby team.
If you have time please visit my blog http://wishenryf.blogspot.co.nz/
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ReplyDeleteWow Detroit - what a powerful image you've created! Remember to use images that are "free to use" on your blog images - I know that you checked these for this item, of course!
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DeleteKonichiwa Detroit, my name is Kobe from Waikowhai Primary School.
ReplyDeleteI really like your all about me presentation. I like how you put a picture of yourself on it and a picture of your favorite game, I like black ops to I’m wondering what your favorite gun to use is? I think you should check your writing again because there are a lot of errors. I would really appreciate if you would comment on my work. Here is the link to my blog http://wpskobep.blogspot.co.nz/ -Feel free to comment
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my frvariot gun is gun is on bo1 is ak47 on bo2 is peac kepper on b03 is riper
DeleteSup Detroit my name is Sione I go to Waikowhai primary school. I see that you like Black ops 3 and Xbox and stuff I do to. I also love your background I should've used that one instead. How did you get it??
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Sincerely from Sione.
Hey Sione,
DeleteGreat to see you sharing in Detroit's learning from last year. Remember to find the balance between formal and informal- you've got a bit of both :-)
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Hi my name is Antonio from Waikowhai Primary School.
ReplyDeleteYou're all about me looks really cool, and I like the pictures on your poster. I like how you said what you're good at and what you like doing. Also I like playing games as well and my favourite game is minecraft, what’s your favourite game? And I am year 5.
I would like if you could visit my blog, http://wpsantoniom.blogspot.co.nz/.
From Antonio.
my favourite game is mine craft my favrouriet person is steve and my other favouriet game is bo3
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ReplyDeleteHello Detroit My name is Ricky from Waikowhai Primary School. Your All about me has a lot of information about your favorite things to do like what video games you prefer and what console you favor.
I also think your font for your heading was very effective because the outline made it stand out. Maybe next time you could make it in a google slide so there can be one subject about you per slide next time can you put more school subjects in it?
I have made an all about me and posted it on my blog too.
Yours sincerely Ricky Blog you later!
(http://wpsrickyl.blogspot.co.nz/)
Hi Detroit my name is Hame and i go to Waikowhai Primary
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I liked your all about me and how you liked Rugby.I also like rugby and i want to be the best All Black in the World. What position are you in rugby?
Come check out my cool blog at http://wpshamep.blogspot.co.nz/.
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Hello Detroit,My name is Steven from Waikowhai Primary school.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your all about me post.I really liked how you explained what you liked to do.And i also like to play games to.I also like to play rugby too. What position do you play in Rugby? I think the colour was very effective to your background and your font suits the background to your all about me. Maybe you could use.It would be very cool if you could visit my blog at http://wpsstevenu.blogspot.co.nz/
From Steven. :)
Hello my name is Reegan I go to Waikowhai Primary School.
ReplyDeleteI like your all about me. The Rugby pictures are the best.
You can you go to my blog at http://wpsreeganh.blogspot.co.nz/
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Hi my name is Melinda and I am a student at Owairaka Primary in room 19.
ReplyDeleteI really like your All About me google drawings. I like how you put images and words so people can read it and understand what the pictures are like. I like the Batman and Superman image, have you seen the movie? Here is a link of the trailor of the Batman vs Superman movie- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IwfUnkBfdZ4 ( plus the video is a teaser trailor).
Please visit my blog- http://odsmelindas.blogspot.co.nz/
Blog ya later,
Melinda
Kia ora my name Is Antonio from Owairaka School. I like your ‘All About Me’ post. Do you play rugby? I like the All blacks and i support the All blacks. My favourite character is Goku in Dragon ball Z. Maybe you can use gifs of the All blacks and Rey Mysterio? If you don’t know about gifs just search up Rey Mysterio gifs and it would come up with moving pictures of him. It would be great if you want to come to my blog and comment. http://odsantoniot.blogspot.co.nz/
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Hi my name is Sean from Wesley intermediate school and i just have some questions to ask you but if you don't want to answer the questions i ask you it's fine
ReplyDeletehere's my first question what console are you on xbox1 ps4 xbox 360 or ps3
what realy intersted me into this blog is that the black ops 3 photo because i am really good at black ops 3 and i would
just to see if you wanted to play with me
From Sean.A
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ReplyDeleteI really like the way you have set out your drawing with boxes for each image. It was awesome how you put the All Blacks in the drawing and it reminded me of my favourite All Black Richie McCaw. Detroit make sure you reread your comment and use capital letters for your name.
ReplyDeleteI really like. that you have put the All Blacks in your image and I think that you should use capital letters in your name.
ReplyDeleteAnd I like to do boxing is your favourite. character in the All Blacks Richie McCaw. and I think you should use some describing words
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ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Jackson and I am a student in Room 11 at South Hornby School. I really like the Call of Duty picture. It made me think of war games. Have you thought about good things because they are bad games. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is herehttp://middlesyndicatelearningcommunity.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Evan and I am a student in Room 9 at South Hornby School. I really like how you balanced your page . Your post made me think of when the All Blacks won the rugby world cup. Have you thought about fixing up your post just incase there are any mistakes. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is
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I like how you put the images in little boxes. The All Black reminded me of my favorite player Richie McCaw. Next time you should put a capital letter for your name. I like how you put the superman photo in, it reminded me of watching Superman vs Batman.
ReplyDeleteHi there my name is Dylan I am in room 11 at south hornby school
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ReplyDeleteAll blacks too. My favorite is Dan Carter .You could use capitals in your name.
Hi Detroit, I really like your images. It’s cool how you did all the images in just one square. Have you thought about putting capitals at the start of your name. It made me think of xbox games.
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Kia ora Detroit i'm Henry from Wesley Intermediate School, I really liked how you used pictures to show what you like, and that you used some information to talk about yourself. I liked how you took a photo about yourself to show the readers what you look like. I think that you should write more information about yourself and to work on your punctuation and you full stops. What's your favorite game to play and who's your favorite rugby team.
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